Feedback of my Final video

Throughout the whole process i have showed my video to my target audience to get there views and ideas on how to improve it.
The first draft i made the feedback i recieved was that
. The lip syncing was completley out of time 
. Some of the clips were to long and blurry
. There was some spaces between clips that needed to be filled in
. And there was to much of her sticking her tongue out.
There also were some postives.
. Her clothes were suitable and fit her personality
. The locations were nice and varied
. The camera angles were good and interesting to watch
After this my aim was to fix the problems and things that my target audience didnt like.

I cut out some of the clips with her tongue sticking out and filmed some more and replaced them with her doing different things some as singing and doing different hand gestures and singing to the camera.
The clips that were to long i cut down so they were shorter and the blurry ones i also cut out.
The spaces that were between the clips i filled with my clips! And the lip syncing i fixed by slowing down the clips so they matched the song.

The second draft i showed to my target audience i receieved the following.
. Some of the lip syncing still needs fixing
. Transistions need to be added
. And its a bit jolty at points throughout.
I was happy with this and determined to fix it as it i knew it was fixable and i was nearly there to creating a better and professional music video.
They continued to like
. The new clips and locations that i added
. Her outfits and the camera shots that of her moving close and speaking into the camera
. And her attuitude really suit the song

I made some more changes, and made the clips run smoother by cutting them shorter and slower so they wont run fast and be jolty.
I also added some transistions, but the right amount so there was not to much and it wasnt to overpowering.
And i finished the lip syncing so it is now perfect and fits in completely with the song.

The last viewing i showed my target audience i recieved the following.
. Lip syncing is really good and fits with the song
. The transistions look professional and make the video better to watch
. The camera angles all match and work really well with the song
. The locations also work well with the song
. The colours are vibrant and very varied
. Its very different and unique
. Her style and outfit show her personality and attuitude
. Her piercing shots look really good and effective.

I was very happy with my feedback and the final outcome of my video. My audience gave me positive messages and points that are strong and compliment my work. I also feel that i have made a professional, sucessful video that supports everything i orginally wanted to create.